Acrostic Poem

[Madeline Knight]

Hi there! I wrote this Acrostic poem a while back using a feminine name I love (Madeline), so Tell me what Y’all think!

 

 

Matthew, now free from your homely confines

Allow yourself to dress how you define

Dresses with petticoats, ruffles plenty

Each nail painted, makeup to look pretty.

Leggings with mary janes tied off with bows

It’s quite old school, but how I love it so

Now a tail and ears too; you’re now complete.

End of the night, now a day very sweet.

[Casey Amber Twitchings]

That’s a nice poem Matthew. It paints a good picture of how you feel. Your meter is nice too. Just a quick question. What do you mean by “Now a tail and ears too”? By ears do you mean earrings? And what about the tail? The only thing I would change is the third line. The meter there is slightly off. I’d suggest “Dresses with petticoats, ruffles aplenty“. And now that I looked up the definition of acrostic that’s pretty clever. Good job all around.

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