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    Marti
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    Have you ever tried your hand at a haiku? I’m no expert but in simple terms a haiku is 3 lines long. The 1st and 3rd are composed of 5 syllables, and the second has 7. It’s quite usual to have a ‘natural’ reference, e.g. sun, seasons, mountains. It doesn’t rhyme, and often comes across a bit cryptic. All a bit Zen!

    That’s it really. I’ll post the one I’ve just written. I’ve weaved in a slight cd reference. I’m not claiming it’s any good, but what the …

    If anyone wants to add their own, that’d be wonderful.

    Marti xxx

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    • #606261
      Sylvia
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      When we need them most
      our Friends come to our rescue
      Thats what Friends are for

      This is for the Girls that where there for me
      when I needed them the most.

      Thank you very much my Dear Friends !

      Love Sylvia.

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      the heart beats faster
      the step across the threshold
      the sun now golden

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      Stevie Steiner
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      Accepting Myself

      Tranquility in my Heart

      I am given Peace.

      🙂

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      Ciao Topaz
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      adventure awaits

      seeing me through smoky eyes

      click clack of my walk

       

       

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      Amy Catrelle
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      Was that the doorbell?
      I thought the stars were out now.
      I forgot my drab.

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      Marti
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      A new face appears
      No deceit is intended
      A crossdresser smiles

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        Amy Catrelle
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        If I dress in white
        A man lost in translation
        She takes the new sun

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        Sylvia
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        Now is a good day…

        A good friend is back on Now..

        Now the sun breaks through !

         

         

         

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      Elizabeth(Liz)
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      Is this Hiku?

      The body of a man,
      The mind of a woman,
      A typical Gemini

      Liz

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      Elizabeth(Liz)
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      Marti, I personally haven’t , but I’ve a black belt in 🎤 Karaoke
      Advent is coming
      Christmas is near
      Think I’ll go and get a can of beer.
      What shoe size are you?

      Liz

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      Marti
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      Please walk in my heels
      – at least for an hour or two?
      Oh, they don’t fit you!

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      Sylvia
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      Femininity

      Yearning to be a Woman

      Then Divinity !

       

      Love Sylvia

       

       

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      Sylvia
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      Hidden and secret so quit…

      deep feelings inside of me , growing , Feminine !

      comittment , down the road , Happiness ?

       

      Love Sylvia

       

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      Sylvia
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      My Crossdressing journey loving myself

      Where will it lead me I wonder.

      Being Myself from now on ?

       

      Love Sylvia

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      Marti
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      Raining already.
      I’m not dressed up for tear drops
      As if weather cares

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      Gisela Claudine
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      The heart beats loudly

      as the night suddenly breaks.

      It makes me wonder.

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      Val’sheril Starsong
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      Tell me if you can

      What makes me the pretender

      And her the real thing?

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      Charlene Victoria
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      A boy at birth; me

      Caterpillar, butterfly

      In time: she comes forth.

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      This fuzziness in my head,

      To dress or not to dress is the question,

      The pink mist strikes again,

      Hugs Roz X

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      Raquel Smith
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      to go out or not

      then the yearning wins the day

      in the night, more so

       

      Wasn’t as hard as I remember from school. 😁

      Much love,

      Raquel

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      Charlene Victoria
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      Dress, heels, door before

      Step out and know, sun and breeze

      Exhilarating!

      Blessings,

      Charlene

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      Stevie Steiner
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      The closet opens

      Nervously I step outside

      I am free at last.

      🙂

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      Marti- am I right in assuming haikus have no capitals at start of line?

      If not- there is an added sense of connection – but to where and what?
      A good plot maybe?

      Anya

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        Marti
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        Lol, no idea about what’s ‘right’. But yes, no reason to capitalize if the lines flow. As for plots, the haikus I like best are the ones that make you go “eh?”.

         

        Marti xxx

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      Autumn feast is here

      Stirring senses and mem’ry

      Life, love and hunger.

       

      Anya’s menu.

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      Marti
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      Summer sighs goodbye,

      New make up, a cooler style,

      Time shrugs, looks away

       

       

       

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      Charlene Victoria
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      Hidden there within

      A grain of sand, a pearl makes,

      Beauty discovered

      Blessings,

      Charlene

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      Charlotte Lapin
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      Anima again
      Waxing moonshine upon me
      Night blossom opens

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      Oh the silky feel!
      Makeup, nails, and hair… oh crap!
      Time to go to work.

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      Who is it I see?
      When I look in the mirror
      Is it her or me?

      OR

      What is that strange sound?
      Like silk rubbing on satin?
      Oh, heavens! It’s me!

      Connie

      xxx

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      Marti
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      A face in the sky
      Somehow looks familiar
      Am I a cloud now?

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      Debbie Lynn
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      Inward desire to be her

      Shifting realism of wheat fields in wind

      I slip into my heels

       

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      Clara Cross
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      Eyes flash mascara

      Lips shimmer red in the sun

      Ready to step out.

      Clara

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      Marti
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      A skirt on the line
      The wind teases and tickles
      It will never dry

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        Marti- how about a twist?

        skirting on the line

        a teasing wind that tickles

        will it never dry

        The rhythm change adding a stronger dynamic?
        I’m no expert🤨 -ask Lisa!!!!!!

        ( anya
        With little a

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          Marti
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          anya with a little ‘a’,

          Whatever, whichever you want. Literary criticism is above my pay rate

          Don’t overthink it, remember it’s all a bit zen and all a bit of fun.

          Marti xxx

           

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            Too true,Marti. I blame it on the government. I was once asked what are the principles of teaching music . One of them is to create an avenue for enjoyment through accomplishment, A government advisor said to me – : there is no priority that includes enjoyment. I nearly threw my teddy at him. Good God, what other incentive matters more ???

            We analyse and forget to enjoy. Well reminded, Marti.

             

            Anya

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        Stevie Steiner
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        Alone in my life

        Looking for a happiness

        Tho’ I know not what

        🙂

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      Is this now under copyright? Please sign and add a message “ for my friend Anya”.

       

      this one is so good…. “ Pink upon my soul”,

      prophetic and sublime

      no need of reason nor rhyme

      Speak thru mists of time.

      well done Lisa😊

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