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- This topic has 8 replies, 9 voices, and was last updated 6 years ago by Faye.
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- November 20, 2017 at 5:26 pm #73926
OUT OF THE CLOSET
I wrote this for her of course – She is somebody very special …and, yes, I love her to bits 🙂Resolve at the ready, stilettos are drawn,
Stockings suspendered for dancing til dawn
Hours of prep with the greatest of care
Skin smooth and soft with no trace of a hair
Breast-forms so proudly enshrined in black lace
All hints of manhood concealed with no trace
Make-up is perfect and nails pristine
Necklace and earrings of aquamarine
Little blue dress with a plunge neckline top
Over silky sleek nylons, fresh from the shop
Long golden locks fall in stylish affray
A splash of Chanel is her feminine bouquet
Finally, oh so excited, but shy
She stands at the mirror with a critical eye
Butterflies, caused by a sliver of fear
Minute imperfections seem patently clear
With pride in her purpose – steeling her nerves
Adjusting her posture – checking her curves
Feeling the need that resides at her core
She gathers her courage and steps through the door.
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- November 20, 2017 at 6:03 pm #73937
I love this! Great meter and a great message!I look forward to more from you here!
Cyn - November 20, 2017 at 9:36 pm #73951
Bravo!
Paulette
- November 21, 2017 at 2:01 am #73982Anonymous
Beautifully written, the essence so perfectly captured. Your partner is a very fortunate CD.
- November 21, 2017 at 9:21 am #74016
Beautifully written , such a relationship for all to admire. She is a lucky girl to have you by her side. 🌹
- November 21, 2017 at 1:08 pm #74029Anonymous
The world needs more ppl like you
- February 23, 2018 at 6:26 pm #88772
Wow! Beautiful. She may have to give back the aquamarine though. Aries don’t slay.
Did I say slay🤔
- March 5, 2018 at 4:40 am #90022
Absolutely beautiful, RedGen. It has touched me.
- March 20, 2018 at 3:55 pm #92687
This is so moving and descriptive of how we girls feel.
Faye
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